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Happy V-Day! by Sutexii Happy V-Day! by Sutexii

A valentines day card I made for my mom, who's been one of the most understanding people in my life right now~ <3
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First time giving critique here! :D

:damphyr:Let's start on the color palette!
You've chosen soft warm hues that enhance the mood of this heartwarming scene, very delightful~ I like that little pattern background, too. One thing that confuses me is the blue tint shadows (o_e) that seems a little weird to me??? (Maybe it's my screen's fault //tilts laptop) Just my opinion though, not an important thing! :aww:

:damphyr:Perspective and Anatomy:
Without furniture or other objects, I can't really critique on that. ^^; It seems like the adult pony is lying on something? And I suck at anatomy myself, so, eh, who am I to say about that? Ah well, let's move on. :)

The little pony representing you must have worked very hard on that card! ^o^ The spilled glue and scattered glitter are nice details telling a little tender story- oh my, there's glue dripping off the heart! I guess she couldn't wait for the glue to dry and wanted to give it to her mother as soon as possible~ (I hope she's not getting the glue in her mouth o.o )

All in all, I like this very much, it's so sweet!

Vision: Great hues!
Originality: Now, I can't say this is an original concept o.o but do truly original concepts exist anymore? However, what matters here is the heart... :')
Technique: This is somewhat sketchier than your average commissions, but it feels just right with the softer lines. Also the shading to the manes to show their swirls is a thumbs up! ;)
Impact: A heartwarming picture that tells a tender tale, just like I said before. :love:
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shegoat Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
:-) That totally looks like you two!
Shire7 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute <3
Tokosha Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh WOW. Amazing! I wish my mom was like that xD
But no. Shes a bitch
owls1999 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
daww, this is too precious! *u*
shiny-pebble Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sweet!! :heart:
Your mom must've loved this!!
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Submitted on
February 16, 2013
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